Throughout the past couple weeks we have been reading our 5 part paragraphs. I think in an overall view that we did a great job for our first ones. One thing i think we all need to work on is transitions and no doing plot summary. Almost every paper had this wrong but there was a few that had both of those things right.
I think that I need to work on stronger transitions and commentary. I had transitions but with some of them you couldn't really tell. Also with commentary I need to work on because I had more of a plot summary. I think if I would have read my paper a few more time i could have caught some of the mistakes with the transitions and commentary. Now I will have a better understanding what to do for the next time.
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