Something Interesting

          Something interesting brought up in our discussion  this week was about how they talk about the lobsters being so cute nice creatures. Then they talk about them as ugly because they describe them with color like mud red, cadaver green. How are they both beautiful and ugly?

           I believe that this show different perspectives of objects. Sometimes things can be ugly but beautiful. Also I think that maybe up her on land they would be called ugly. Down in the bottom of the ocean maybe they are one of the most beautiful creatures. Like in the poem they describe them like spiders. I think spiders are the same thing like lobsters in the ugly beautiful kind of way.

         

5 part paragraph

Throughout the past couple weeks we have been reading our 5 part paragraphs. I think in an overall view that we did a great job for our first ones. One thing i think we all need to work on is transitions and no doing plot summary. Almost every paper had this wrong but there was a few that had both of those things right. 

I think that I need to work on stronger transitions and commentary. I had transitions but with some of them you couldn't really tell. Also with commentary I need to work on because I had more of a  plot summary. I think if I would have read my paper a few more time i could have caught some of the mistakes with the transitions and commentary. Now I will have a better understanding what to do for the next time.