Animal Farm Project Evaluation

Emily-  

2. artwork 

3. I think she was pretty effective. She did compare her project to the Russian Revolution. Also she has an creative way of displaying her project.

Sidney- 

2. poem 

3. I think that she was effective. She brought the whole story into play and tied it together nicely. She had a lot of the main parts included. 

Tal- 

2. diagram

3. I believe that Tal was pretty effective. She brings up the fact of them being equal and I feel that she made a good point about that. Also she was creative with her computer skills. 

Hailey-

2. poem

3. I thought that her poem was very creative with the rhyming. She brought up some key points in her poem. Also she didn't make that poem to hard to understand witch is good for all shorts of viewers. 

Adora- 

2. poem

3. I think her poem was very effective. She clearly got the theme across. Also it seems as though she put a lot of effort into this project.

Daniel-

2. sketch 

3. I believe that his sketch was alright. He did well on comparing it to the Russian Revolution. But I feel like some of the elements where not clear. 

Angela-

2. collage

3. I believe that her collage is effective. She clearly shows and states each of the levels and how they are different. That means that she show the elements well two.   

Dan-

2. Comic Life

3. I think he was kind of effective. He showed the pigs and the story well. I don't understand how it relates though.

Paden-

2. diagram

3.Some what effective. I feel like he could have put a little more detail into it. But he does show the book and the Russian Revolution. 

Giselle-

2. slide show

3. I thinks she was effective. She did a great job with presenting her project. She show the elements very well. I really like her project.            

new years extra credit blog

          Now that the new year is starting I had to think of something I would like to accomplish. I think the hardest part was just picking one thing that I would like to accomplish.  So I made a list and the two top things was becoming more physically fit and to get my grades up higher.

          One thing that I want to change this year is becoming more physically fit. This will improve my volleyball skill that will lead me to my goal of playing in college. I have had this goal since I was little and don't know what I would do without volleyball. This will also allow me to live a longer and happier life.  Also this will keep me on the right track and keep me busy so I don't get myself into trouble.

          Another thing I would like to accomplish this year is to improve my grades. School is my key to success. I want to go to college so I can get a steady job so one day I can help support my family. It is really sinking in now that my grades really do matter right now. I will have no time to make up classes throughout high school. Every grade counts for me and this is my future I am slowing letting slip away. I need to grad the ropes while I can and become more aware of my grades. I know I can make this happen by studying harder and paying as close attention in class that I can.

          No one ever said achieving goals where easy. I am ready to face them but i know it will be lots of hard work. But that's how bad I want both of these things. I am willing and ready to work on it and commit myself to reaching both of my goals for this year.